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Re: Untitled BUT Part 1
Yay! Black Rose hits YWS with a fantastic piece! Gee, I really like this piece. It almost kind of slightly nearly sort of reminds me of the day I had ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: Rachel: Dreaming
Hmmm... Though I do find the writing on here good and ummm... Well done. Somehow this is not the kind of story that appeals to me. But other then not ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: The Quest
Hmmm.... Your story seems pretty good. I like its layout. But 'Rae' seems like a girls name to me. I really like this piece and hope that that's not the ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: The Nameless
Oooh... i like your story... But the only thing I have noticed is the the thing Randy pointed out... I am currently working on a extremly, super duper, really loooooooooooooooooooong ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: sweet fallacy
Like Emma said, you do need caps... But other then that, your poem showed intricate structure and it seems like you've put effort into it. I really liked the second ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: The Claret Lion
Ocean Stuff! Pirates! WOOOHOOOO!!!! :D IT'S A PIRATES LIFE FOR ME :D YO HO! I have to say you're writing is stunning! I am left in awe, with a feeling ...
Jan 19, 2005 -
Re: A Heart Split in Two
Hey! Hey! I do believe I'm the first to reply to your poem. Anyway. it's very good. Well written. And well... Good? I honestly am bad at replying. :? :D ...
Jan 19, 2005 -
Re: A few short poems
Umm... I'm kind of new here, and this site works differently then another one I was on. I like your poems. I decided to read them when I saw it ...
Jan 4, 2005
